im hanging from a tree with a ringing in in my ears and a sort of daze as i decide to eject i fall to the floor i stand up as if i know were i am with earth benith my feet as in peel back the jungle derbies as i make my way through this vast place  as i can tell im producing physiological behavior that makes me react in thew most  peculiar way with the tree all around me like humans with different skin completions reds yellows browns as if there pointing at me i witness the sun go down infront of my eyes and the weather change as if reacted to my mood with the clouds showering over me with the thunder that is blowing and lightning that is coming in a flash with the screachies of the and toots and hoots throughout this place

The rain sill came down heavy on the dark gloomy night as i still scratch my way through this mind chamber the rain was hitting the floor echoed in my mind and a sudden change in feeling would take place a rustle in the leaves the bushes around me i tern to see this thing as i stood there bleeding in the cold looking at my proximity as this masked creature of figure dominates my human nature i make the diction to run through the jungle even tho im still fatigue and im still traumatised by the events that took place earlier today

as i sleep under a rock and morning arose i feel up lifted as the sun came apon me a phantom inside me arose and uplifted me  to the shore as this phenomenon took place i walk too the beach and i look at the calm sea as a sudden realization took place , im the only one here i thought i walk across the for a while as i can see these boulders in the distance  when i get up close the massive stones of grate posture just stand there as if to say “what are you looking at” gloating at me ready to bellow like a migrant like a suffering from conflict

 

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  1. Good use of imagery Noah.

    In order to achieve the badges we need to develop your sentence structure. Reread and make sure they all make sense and punctuation,particularly full stops,are used in the right place.

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